Friday, August 6, 2010

Enema Of The State


Happy Friday, crime motherfuckers! It's once again time to cut to the chase. Time to take a little trip to the dark side, where the chicks are hot ... and the action hotter, at the coolest crime joint in cyberspace ... at That Killing Feeling.

In Chapter 9 of FULL BODY, we return to The International, DC's most exclusive 'gentleman's spa,' where we learn the true identity of Asian-fox receptionist Reynolds Tan. Meanwhile, newbie Summer Donovan gets a perverted shock to the system when she begins her session with former vice president Cameron Bisby. We then travel to the airport, where we meet the mysterious Mavra Vlaovic, Yuri's wife and Etya's mother ... back from the dead ...


INT. THE INTERNATIONAL - RECEPTION AREA - NIGHT
The room is empty. Reynolds speaks in to her headset.

REYNOLDS
Boss? I’m going to take five for a smoke.
(listens)
Great, thanks.
(hangs up)
Communist cunt.

EXT. THE INTERNATIONAL - BACK ALLEY - AT THAT MOMENT
Reynolds lights up a super-long Capri.
Fingers a number on her cell phone. Listens.

REYNOLDS
Reynolds Tan for Detective Nassour.
(listens)
Ali? It’s me, Reynolds.
(listens)
Watching her like a hawk.
Are you ready with the sting?
(listens)
Well, if you’ll pardon the expression, sir,
could you please hurry it the fuck up?
It’s been over a year now,
and I’m losing a layer of skin
from scrubbing off the sleaze every night.
(listens)
Hold on tight? Hold on TIGHT?
What the fuck do you think I --
(listens)
Hello? Ali -- ?
(listens)
Goddamn fucking Verizon.
Roaming my ass.

INT. BLACK MASSAGE SUITE - AT THAT MOMENT
Nouvelle Vague’s sultry French-femme bossa nova cover
of Public Image’s THIS IS NOT A LOVE SONG over --

Cammy. Decked out in a black mask,
studded harness and buckled bondage boots.
In power.

Or, ready for Halloween.

Summer trembles in a
tiny rubber French maid outfit.
Holds a feather duster like a wand.
Bites her lower lip.

BISBY
Breathtaking.
(meaningfully)
How do you feel?

SUMMER
Uh -- exposed?

BISBY
Master. Exposed, master.

SUMMER
I’m sorry?

BISBY
You call me master.
When I ask you a question,
you answer ‘master.’
Understand?

SUMMER
(scared)
Yes -- master.

BISBY
Good. Now get down on your knees.

SUMMER
But I thought I was going to --

BISBY
Do it! NOW.
On your KNEES.
Or you will be punished.

SUMMER
Y-yes, sir -- master.

She awkwardly gets down. Kneels.

BISBY
Now put the riding crop in your mouth.

Summer does. Face turns red.

BISBY
Good girl. Yes. She’s humiliated.
Lovely. I believe I see a small tear.
(brightly)
Okay. Massage time.

EXT. DC INTERNATIONAL AIPORT - TARMAC - AT THAT MOMENT
The swirling, ominous Soviet-block new wave bleat of
Lene Lovich’s HOME roils a dark cloud over --

An airplane pulling up to the passenger chute.
AIR CROATIA.

IN THE WAITING AREA
a line of Eastern-Europeans silently file in. Exhausted.

ANGLE ON:

A WOMAN IN BLACK (late 40’s) leads the pack.
Red lips curled with self-satisfaction. Striking.
Despite the shades and hat,
we sense the Chanel-clad lioness is a real stunner.

Meet MAVRA VLAOVIC.
Striding purposely. On a mission.

Black vinyl thigh-high boots
stop short of her micro-mini.

ON THE MOVING SIDEWALK
she glides by. Imperious.
Men look. Double take.

There’s that smile again.
Damn. She knows it.

A GREY SUIT
approaches her. Offers his card.
She WHACKS it away, regal. Laughs.

He shrinks away.
Struck down. Humiliated.

AT THE CUSTOMS WINDOW
A SURLY AGENT appraises her.

SURLY AGENT
You haff anything to declare?

MAVRA
I do not.
(lowers shades, eyes glinting)
Do you?

The agent’s eyes flicker. Wow.

SURLY AGENT
Welcome to America, Ms. Vlaovic.

MAVRA
Miss Vlaovic, dahling.

She pulls out a cigarette case.
Slides out a red Sherman.

SURLY AGENT
I’m sorry, but there’s no smoking.

Mavra lights up. Eyes taunting.

MAVRA
Well, then yoo better point way
to my limousine
before I become enema of state.

3 comments:

  1. Carole!! Honey, what happened to you on FB? Did the censors delete you? Noooooooo!!!! :..[ I miss you already!! Will you come back? Oh, I so miss you... FB is not going to be same...

    Whether or not you do, I will continue to follow your blogs... I am so hooked, and you are such an amazing writer... and awesome person :-)

    If you want to contact me, my email is veronicathepajamathief@yahoo.com - link is also on my blog page. Please be sure and let me know when Nowhere Girl is out... I am looking forward to it.

    OMG!!!! Mavra is haawwwwttttt!!! Wow! your words give me this amazing mental image of Mavra.. I can just see her... leaving a trail of men - and women - with a bad case of the "hornies"... got me a little horny... hehe!!

    So... little "Cammy" has a bit of the "domme" in him, eh? Poor Summer!

    Okay... so whay is Mavra in town? Teaming up with Yuri? I'm thinking... her own agenda?

    Take care, Sweetie... looking forward to Monday!

    xoxoxo <3

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  2. Hey, babe. Yep. Facebook pulled the plug. But I have a new account, and I think I refriended you onit, but am not sure, as there was no pic next to 'Ronnie Lewis.' Let me know ... I'll also send you an email.

    Mavra is a personal fave. Modeled her after Lena Olin on ALIAS ...

    xoxo<3

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  3. Nope... not me... I have my pic on my profile... wonder who that is? I just did search for name Ronnie Lewis... only 405 hits!

    Hmmm... I never saw ALIAS... I just googled Lena Olin though.... mmmm.... she's kinda hot!! Okay, so when I am reading story, I can picture Lena...

    xoxo <3

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