The Great Escape

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In Chapter 47 of BABY HEISTER, Kelsey, Jo, Doc and Simon pull of the bank job without a hitch, but as they make their escape, Dod reveals to Kelsey a slight hitch: while they were out getting revenge on the Yakuza, they got busted by bad cop Flint Cole, who now wants a piece of the pie ...


INT. BANK - MANAGER’S OFFICE - DAY
A small space with the
usual functional furniture.

Doc and Jo look at Big Bank Guard
and Beige Manager, now handcuffed,
sitting on the floor,
facing away from each other.

DOC
What time do the other
employees get here?

BEIGE BANK MANAGER
Any minute now.

DOC
Then we’ll make this fast.

Jo puts a piece of duct tape
on Big Guard’s mouth.
RIPS off another piece for Beige.

BEIGE BANK MANAGER
Do you really have to --

JO
(SLAPS it on)
Yeah. We really do.

EXT. BANK - BACK ALLEY - DAY
Simon and Kelsey throw in
the last bag of money
into the Dumpster.

We see Kelsey’s back
in her coveralls.

Doc and Jo come out.
They help them throw in lumber
to cover the money.

Kelsey and Simon close the
rear door to the armored car.

Lock it with the guards’ keys.
Get in the truck.

Simon behind the wheel,
Kelsey beside him, Doc and Jo
in the rear compartment
behind the cab.

Simon GUNS the engine,
and they start off down the alley.

INT. DUMPSTER TRUCK - MOVING - DAY
Simon POUNDS the steering wheel.

SIMON
We fucking DID it.

KELSEY
(sings)
Take me down to Paradise City,
where the cash is green
and the girls are gritty --

Doc leans into the cab.
Looks serious.

DOC
We need to talk.
Something went down last night.

EXT. BANK - FRONT ENTRANCE - DAY
A pair of BANK EMPLOYEES (20’s)
stand at the front door.

A HOT TELLER presses a buzzer.
Looks at the other, a
CHUBBY HISPANIC ASSISTANT MANAGER.

HOT TELLER
Still no answer.

CHUBBY HISPANIC ASSISTANT MANAGER
(peers in the window)
That’s strange.
Maybe they’re around back
because of the delivery. C’mon.

INT. DUMPSTER TRUCK - MOVING - DAY
Doc looks at Kelsey.
Then Simon. White-faced.

DOC
When the two of you went off
to take care of the Yakuza,
we got busted.

DOC
Undercover dick by the
name of Flint Cole.

Found us in the hotel,
but didn’t let on
to the other cops.
Saw an opportunity.

KELSEY
Why didn’t you TELL us?

DOC
Didn’t want you to be distracted.
If we fucked up the job,
we’d be really fucked.

KELSEY
So what happens now?

DOC
In exchange for helping us
escape with the dough --
which he gets a cut of, by the way --
he wants half the stash.

SIMON
The bloody BASTARD.

KELSEY
But the cops have it.

DOC
Yeah.
But he knows where it is,
and how to get it back --
if we help him.

INT. ABANDONED GROCERY STORE - DAY
Costello SLAMS down the phone.
RACES over to Darryl’s desk,
where he sits and chats
with Flint over cups of coffee.

COSTELLO
Chief, the First National Bank
of California’s been hit.
Main branch, downtown.

FLINT
The bank where the
Hazards were killed?
I thought it was
closed for repairs.

COSTELLO
It was, but now it’s done.

DARRYL
And they were delivering all
the money they’d need today --

Another COP (40’s) African-American,
built like a linebacker,
salt and pepper,
approaches them, excited.

LINEBACKER COP
Chief.
We just a call from a
guy at a gas station.
Recognized Doc and his crew
when they stopped to refuel.

DARRYL
WHERE?

LINEBACKER COP
Near a freeway entrance.
Said they’re heading east
on the ten. Big U-Haul.

DARRYL
Call the Highway Patrol.
Have them set up a roadblock.

LINEBACKER COP
One step ahead of you.

Flint gets up.
Starts heading toward the door.

FLINT
I’m gonna catch those fuckers.

DARRYL
They gotta BIG lead on you.
You’ll never catch them.

He GRABS the knob.
Turns. Looks. Sneers.

FLINT
You haven’t seen ME drive.