Friday, July 10, 2015

Submissive Bitches


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In Chapter 50 of BABY HEISTER, Kelsey, Jo and Simon look for weapons in the semi they're being held captive in so they can fight their captor and escape. Meanwhile, the cops locate bad cop Flint Cole and master heister Doc Hazard, on their way to the police precinct to steal back Doc's cash ...


EXT. MARINA - PARKING LOT - DAY
The semi is parked
at the far end of a
parking lot near a commercial slip
where large vessels are berthed.

Boats for parties.
Fishing trips.
Whale watching.

Eb gets out of the cab.
Walks over to the rear doors.

Opens them.
Climbs up.
Pulls out his piece.

INT. SEMI TRAILER - CONTINUOUS
Simon climbs out of the
Dumpster truck cab.
Looks at Eb.

SIMON
Hey.
No need to point that at me.
We’re your submissive bitches,
remember?

EB
Jus’ making sure you ain’t
gonna pull no monkey-shines.
Now start takin’ the
money bags outta the dumpster.
They gonna be here soon.

Eb SLAMS the door shut.
The padlock CLICKS.

Kelsey and Jo climb
out of the truck.

KELSEY
Okay.
Let’s get started.

JO
Look for stuff
we can use as weapons.

KELSEY
But Flint said if
we tried anything --

JO
Honey, you don’t know Doc.
Not only IS he
gonna try something,
he’s gonna expect US to.
No way in HELL is he
gonna let them get away
with ONE DOLLAR
of our nest egg.

INT. TASK FORCE HEADQUARTERS - AT THAT MOMENT
Darryl Rooker sits at his desk
talking on the phone.

He SPITS OUT his coffee.
Face turns beet-red.

DARRYL
They WHAT?

INTERCUT WITH:

INT. POLICE PRECINCT - OFFICE - DAY
A small, cramped space
filled with police shit.

Piles of file folders.
Plaques and framed
commendations on the walls.

Bald, Black Cop
sits behind his desk.
Glares at Rooker.

BALD, BLACK COP
You heard me.
They fucking SHOT Rodriguez
AND another officer.

DARRYL
And they just -- got away?

BALD, BLACK COP
Yeah.
But one of the officers
ID’d them.

DARRYL
Who the fuck WAS it?

BALD, BLACK COP
You’re never gonna believe it --
DARRYL
Fucking TRY me.

BALD, BLACK COP
Flint Cole -- and Doc Hazard.

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