Monday, June 27, 2011

Tourist Wrangler



Hey there, crime kids. Happy fucking Monday. It's time once again to take a trip to the dark side, where your most violent fantasies become sins of the flesh, right here, where the hardboiled action is non-stop, at the coolest crime joint in cyberspace ... at That Killing Feeling.

In Chapter 3 of LEGS, demented German snuff film director Klaus Speer screens his latest 'creation' in his secret underground studio. Meanwhile, private eye Carrie Love vows to find Laura's killer, and enlists the help of her ex, patrolwoman Megan Paul ...


EXT. CARRIE'S PATIO - DAY
Two detectives, JESUS VALENTINE
and ROBERT O'HENRY sip designer coffee.
They watch the body get stuffed into a bag.

Valentine, a fireplug of a man
stuffed like a sausage into a
too-small suit lights a smoke
with a click of his Zippo.

VALENTINE
Pretty gnarly tattoos for a chick.

O'Henry, pale, whisper-thin,
squints in the bright sun.

O'HENRY
I'd still fuck her.
(off Valentine's stare)
Not now. Jesus Christ.

VALENTINE
I told you not to
take my name in vain.

Pause.

O'HENRY
I bet she was into kinky shit,
you know? Probably did pornos.

VALENTINE
Those piercing's gotta fuckin hurt, man.
She had her fuckin labia pierced.

O'HENRY
I saw this picture once of a guy
who had his dick pierced?
That's shit's gotta fucking hurt. Shit.
(beat)
What do you think our chances are
of finding the head?

Valentine flicks his cigarette
into the hot tub.

VALENTINE
About the same as me
getting my dick pierced.

INT. VIDEO MONITOR - DAY
Images flash over pounding,
ugly German techno music.

Every fifth image is a tight shot
of a penis on a table.

A hand holds a spike over it --
a wooden mallet comes down --

INT. PRODUCTION STUDIO - CONTINUOUS
The faint thump-thump-thump
of tweaker club music.

A dimly lit studio crammed with
postproduction equipment.

Klaus and Jorel sit in front of the monitor.
ZIVA, underage, Gothic-gorgeous and
totally pierced pleads her case.

ZIVA
It would mean so much to me, Klaus.
Saturday night is the Equinox,
and I'm supposed to be the sacrifice.

KLAUS
You should have told me earlier.
There's no time to find a, uh --
(turns, checks her out)
-- suitable substitute.
I mean, after all,
you handle the money.

They lock eyes.

KLAUS
I'm sorry, my little rose petal.

She does a slow burn,
grabs the doorknob.

ZIVA
Yeah, right.

And she's gone.

KLAUS
The things I have to do
in the name of dominance and submission.

Klaus gingerly rubs his crotch.

JOREL
Is it healing okay?

KLAUS
Of course. Surgical stainless steel.
(beat)
Those fuckheads at MTV.
They wouldn't know art
if it fucked them in the ass.
(punches a button)
Enough show and tell.
Time to look at the dailies.

A CD slides out.

JOREL
Roll it, Mein Herr.
I'm chubby already.

KLAUS
(takes out disc, grabs another)
And I thought you were
just glad to see me.

He shoves it in. Giggles.

JOREL
We hit the fucking lottery
with this one.

KLAUS
I like the part where
she hits the tree. Hold on.

ON THE MONITOR
we see the road where
the two men were earlier that day.

KLAUS (O.C.)
Our website's gonna get so many hits.

A shrieking Chick flies across the screen.

CHICK
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

She takes a sharp turn,
flails her arms wildly --
plows into a tree with a CRACK --
and flops to the ground
like a ruined Barbie.

JOREL
And people jerk off to this stuff.

INT. CARRIE'S KITCHEN - DAY
Carrie leans against the sink.
Megan sits at the bar across from her.
They clink mugs in a toast.
Megan takes a sip.

MEGAN
(makes a face)
Jesus, Carrie, I said one shot.
(swallows, pounds her chest)
What is that stuff?

Carrie takes a long pull.
Licks her lips.

CARRIE
Goldschlager.
It's a cinnamon liqueur.
It's got gold flecks in it.
(lights new smoke off old one)
Laura turned me onto it.

MEGAN
(sips, a weak smile)
I'm so sorry, baby, I'm so sorry.

Carrie grabs the bottle, pours some more.
Megan watches her drink, helpless.

CARRIE
I'm gonna find her fucking killer.

MEGAN
That could be kinda dangerous, Carrie.

CARRIE
That's why I'm gonna need your help.

MEGAN
But I'm strictly beach patrol.
I'm a tourist wrangler.

CARRIE
And I just lost the love of my life.

Pause.

MEGAN
I haven't seen that look
in a long time.
Since that night you
jumped out of the limo.

CARRIE
I'll be good. I promise.

MEGAN
That’s what I’m afraid of --

1 comment:

  1. Very cool! I like the dialogue with Valentine and O'Henry... nice! "About the same as me
    getting my dick pierced." LOL!! Come on, Jesus! It can't be that bad... we get our labia pierced all the time... nothing to it. Man up, dude! Hahaha!

    I like these two!

    Now, Klaus... this guy is one sick little puppy... I hope he gets his in the end! HA! I made a funny... that's probably just where he wants it... in the "end"! (Oh, Ronnie... you are too funny tonight, girl!) :D

    OMG!! Do I even want to ask What Klaus had done, that he is rubbing his crotch for?

    Okay... I'm curious now.... :)

    So... Megan and Carrie are going to team up? Nice... not trying to tell you what to write or anything, but if you had a little "scene" (if you get my drift) with Carrie and Megan... that would be nice! *wink*

    LOL!! That is the same thing Tina says when I tell her that I will be "good"... "that's what I'm afraid of!" HAHA!!

    Oh yeah... you told me about Goldschlager! I saw a bottle a while back... very pretty! But, I remembered what you said. I think I'll stick to vodka, sloe gin, and my new favorite-mango margaritas... not all together, of course! LOL!!

    Happy Tuesday, hun! Great read!

    Actually, I should say Happy Wednesday, huh! Haha!!

    XOXOXO <3 <3 <3

    Ronnie

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