Tuesday, July 20, 2010

Like Shooting Fish In A Rehab

Happy Tuesday, crime fucks! Are you ready to get your ya-ya's out? Ready for another pulse-pounding, ultra-violent thrill ride to the gates of hell? Then you've come to the right place, where the chicks are hot, the drinks are cold, and the hardboiled kicks non-stop, right here ... at That Killing Feeling.

In Chapter 26 of THE HEISTERS, it's mad dash for the stadium heist loot, as Kelsey chases Doll onto a construction site, with Ronan not far behind. The cops start closing in, just as Kelsey has a big confrontation with Ronan about just who was setting up who ... and then big secrets are revealed in his hair-raising installment ...


EXT. VENICE ALLEY - DRIVEWAY - NIGHT
Doll’s got the trunk open. Tries to pull out one of the duffle bags,
but has a hard time with it. Too HEAVY.

DOLL
Shit.
(beat)
I can’t run with these --

She unzips it.
Starts stuffing bundles of cash
in her jacket pockets.
Down her jeans. In her purse.

THROUGH THE HEDGES
Kelsey watches.

KELSEY
(to herself)
The MONEY --

PUSHES her way through the hedges.
Comes out the other side.

KELSEY
BITCH. That’s MY MONEY.

Doll turns. Looks. Sees Kelsey.

DOLL
Fuck YOU, cunt --

She SLAMS the trunk shut.
Starts RUNNING AWAY.
Kelsey TAKES OFF after her.

KELSEY
COME BACK HERE --

FURTHER ON DOWN THE ALLEY
Ronan hears the yelling.

RONAN
SHIT --

And he races toward Doll’s driveway.

INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR - NIGHT
Isaacs and Nunn sip their coffee.

ISAACS
I think we should tell her we’re out here.
Might get spooked if she sees us watching her.

NUNN
Yeah. Good idea. Let’s go.

They get out of the car.
Walk toward the building.

IN THE ALLEY
Doll TAKES OFF down the alley on foot.
Kelsey sees her. CHASES AFTER her.

Ronan FLIES through the bushes.
RUNS AFTER both of them.

AT THE CORNER
Doll sees a four-story apartment building under construction.
It’s covered with a maze of scaffolding, like catacombs.

She starts climbing up.

KELSEY
Follows right behind.
Starts climbing up after her.

KELSEY
Better watch your back, BITCH,
cause I’m RIGHT BEHIND YOU.

DOLL
Looks down. Sees Kelsey climbing up.
Sees a bucket lying on the next level.
GRABS it. THROWS it down --

It HITS Kelsey in the head. BANG.
She FLIES off the scaffolding.
Hits the ground, BANG.

Ronan races up to the building.
Panting. Out of breath.

Kelsey gets up. Sees him.

KELSEY
You goddamn fucking ASSHOLE.

RONAN
SOMEBODY had to break your streak, baby.

KELSEY
We were DRUNK, Ronan.
It was NEW YEAR’S EVE.
We’d just done a JOB --

UP ABOVE
Doll looks down. Listens. Motionless.

ON THE GROUND
Ronan glares at Kelsey.

RONAN
You -- laughed at me. Arrogant BITCH.

KELSEY
I gotta admit, it was almost brilliant.
So how did you get Jackie and Doll on the hook?

RONAN
Are you KIDDING? It was EASY --

INT. BAR - NIGHT
Ronan sits at the bar with Jackie Tempel.
Pours them beers from a big pitcher.
SLAPS him on the back.

RONAN (V.O.)
I’d heard from Jackie’s boss
that he dumped his druggy girlfriend,
so I made him an offer he couldn’t refuse.

JACKIE
Seriously?

RONAN
Easy money. You rock her world,
and there’s ten large in it for ya.

JACKIE
But how do I know she’ll go for me?

RONAN
Trust me. After a job she’s like a cougar in heat --

INT. DOLL’S APARTMENT - NIGHT
Doll and Ronan sit on the couch.
Ronan finishes chopping up a few lines
of coke on the coffee table.

RONAN (V.O.)
And then reeling in Amy Winehouse
was like shooting fish in a rehab --

Doll SNARFS up a big, fat one.
Then another. Shakes her head.
Rushing on the drugs. Eyes BLAZING

DOLL
Holy shit, is that UNCUT?

RONAN
Just like me, baby --

DOLL
(puts her hand on his knee)
So let me get this straight.
I kill the cocksucker,
and we split a MILLION BUCKS?

RONAN
Yeah --
(big smile)
And I get to split YOU.

Doll smiles. Evil.
Reaches over.
GRABS Ronan’s crotch.

DOLL
Ooh. I see big boy is PACKING.
This is getting better and better --

2 comments:

  1. Ahh... so, knowing Kelsey is as randy as a 24 year old lesbian at an all-girl orgy, after a heist, Ronan plays on Kelsey's weakness to separate her from the loot, bringing Jackie's swinging dick in.... then, enter stage-left... Doll offs Kelsy's little fuck-buddy and waltzes out with the loot...

    Ronan's pretty damn crafty, engineering the elimination of the rest of the crew... wonder what he has in store for Doll? Because, I'm thinking Ronan has no intention of splitting anything with Doll, except her legs... hehe!

    AWESOME, Carole!! This has been incredible! Can't wait for the next chapter... <3 xoxoxo

    ...now, where is my little "fuck-buddy"(of course, I would never say that to her face... don't fancy sleeping on the sofa for a week)? Oh, Tina.... honey? Muaah!!

    Catch ya on the crime side... babe! hehe!!

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  2. So glad you're liking it, doll.

    But WAIT. There are more surprises in store.

    Better strap in tight, cause it gets even MORE evil ... !

    xoxo<3

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