Friday, November 11, 2011

Flaming Creatures



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In Chapter 20 of ZOMBIE & JULIET, Rommy, Gaga, Brick and the revolutionaries escape from a rabid hoard of zombies that chase them ... down into the subway, where they now must try and travel uptown on foot ...

EXT. GREENWICH VILLAGE - NIGHT
SCREAMING shatters the still of the night.

A PACK OF WILD ZOMBIES
appears down the street,
RACING right at them.

BRICK
Quick, GET ON THE TRUCK.

They all RUN to the vehicle.
JUMP on, just as the zombies get there,
but Merk and Gaga aren’t
quite fast enough, and --

An infected GRABS Merk,
BITES into his neck.

The others PILE ON
and start EATING him.


Rommy GRABS Gaga,
pulls her onto the truck.

Brick JAMS it in gear,
HITS the gas,
and they TAKE OFF.

The truck goes about ten feet,
then STALLS OUT. Out of gas.

BRICK
Mother-FUCKER.

The zombies finish eating Merk.
Turn and look. See them.

JAG
Holy SHIT.

ROMMY
(points)
Subway. OVER THERE --

Everyone JUMPS off the truck
and RUNS to a subway entrance.

They FLY down the steps
three at a time.
Get to the bottom.

Brick GRABS the gate.
SLAMS it shut behind them,
just as --

The zombies SMASH
against it.

They SCREAM,
BANG against the steel bars.

The lock STRAINS against the hasp.
Hammer turns on his flamethrower.
Evil grin.

HAMMER
Time for a little barbecue --

BRICK
What about the SMOKE?

HAMMER
Heat RISES, baby --

The zombies BANG, BANG, BANG
on the bars. SCREAMING.

ROMMY
HURRY. It’s about to GIVE --

RENO
Do it.
We’ll run down the tunnel.

BRICK
(nods, to Hammer)
Go ahead. Roast ’em.

HAMMER
'Flaming Creatures,' anyone?

He aims the blowtorch at the gate,
and a GIANT BALL OF FLAMES SHOOTS OUT
and FRIES the zombies.

They SQUEAL in pain.
CRACKLE and POP
into gooey puddles
of charred flesh and bone.

And sure enough,
the toxic black smoke
SHOOTS UP the stairs.

BRICK
C’mon, let’s go take the A train.

They walk toward the turnstiles.
One by one, they JUMP over them.

Head across the platform
to the subway tracks.

JAG
Monster and me will
go ahead and check it out.

MONSTER
(points to the right)
North is this way --

They JUMP down onto the tracks.
Start walking.

Jag and Monster go up ahead of them.
Gaga takes the rear.

Still in shock.
Rommy puts his arm around her.

ROMMY
Hey. Are you okay?

GAGA
No, I’m NOT OKAY.
My whole family’s DEAD.

ROMMY
Well, at least you -- know.
I didn’t get a chance to --
(beat)
I don’t know if
my mom and dad are --

He looks away.

GAGA
I’m so sorry --

ROMMY
And they got MERK.
He was my BEST FRIEND.

They hear the noise of wheels
WHIRRING along the rails.

BRICK
What the fuck is THAT?

A wooden HAND TRUCK appears.
Jag and Monster pumping
on each side of the handles.

JAG
Look what WE found.

MONSTER
Leave the driving to us --

2 comments:

  1. Oh no! Not Merk! Ahh... the good die young... *sniff*

    Nice work with the flame thrower... "...gooey puddles of charred flesh and bone." Damn!! :)

    Yeah, time to get out of there before more zombies show up... they're gonna be pissed!

    Great week of chapters, hun! WOW!! Awesome dialogue... vivid scenes of horror and destruction... I love the scenes with the survivors... maintaining their humanity amidst the horrors!

    Keep up the amazing work, sweetie!

    xoxoxoxo <3 <3 <3

    Ronnie

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  2. Well, that's the thing with these zombie movies. People start dying, one by one, until we're left with ...

    ???

    xoxo

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