Tuesday, January 25, 2011

Deep Stealth



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In Chapter 36 of NOWHERE GIRLS, deep in her underground lair, evil criminal mastermind Honey Almond reveals a stunning revelation to her captives, super-spy sisters Cherry Nation and April Street, and then makes them 'an offer they can't refuse' ...


EXT. MANN’S CHINESE THEATER - NIGHT
A pair of FBI TECHS drill holes
into the sidewalk with lasers.

Max and Sunday watch,
along side Grim-Looking Agent.

MAX
So how does it work?

GRIM-LOOKING AGENT
They’re drilling holes
at a forty-five degree angle.
When they get to the lower foundation,
they’ll then angle in.

He holds up a long, thin tube.

GRIM-LOOKING AGENT (CONT’D)
This has a laser-camera at the end.
Can see through ANYTHING.

SUNDAY
Gives a whole new meaning
to the term ‘deep stealth’, huh?

One of the techs turns and looks at them.

GRUFF TECH
I’m in the sub-basement.
Bring me the snake.

Grim-Looking brings it over.
Hands to Gruff Tech.

GRIM-LOOKING AGENT
Here you go.

GRUFF TECH
(takes it)
Thanks.

Gruff starts stuffing the tube into the hole.
Max looks at Sunday. Raises an eyebrow.

MAX
Give you any ideas?

SUNDAY
In your hat, buster.

MAX
Sorry. Didn’t mean to make an asp of myself.
SUNDAY
(shakes her head)
So many men. So few bullets in a gun --

INT. HONEY’S INTERROGATION ROOM - AT THAT MOMENT
Cherry and April stand in the cube. Glare at Honey.

APRIL
You’ll never get away with this,
the place is SWARMING WITH FBI.

CHERRY
What have you done with my FUCKING KIDS?

HONEY
Ladies, ladies, ladies --
is that any way to talk to your MOTHER?

Honey smiles.
Starts pacing around them in a slow circle.

HONEY (CONT'D)
Surprise --
(beat)
Of course I’m still a bit peeved
that you killed your FATHER --
(beat)
But I understand. He was an evil man.
(shakes her head)
Talk about a messy DIVORCE --

APRIL
Wait a minute.
Let me get this straight --

CHERRY
My head is spinning.
You mean to say, you and SLEDGE --

HONEY
Are your parents, yes.
(beat)
We were young and poor,
and the bastard didn’t think
we could take care of you.
It was HIS idea
to put you up for adoption.
I’ve been sick about it ever since.

APRIL
And you put us through all of this
for the same reason HE did --

CHERRY
(to April)
She wants us to WORK FOR HER?

HONEY
Well, of course. You two are the BEST.
I threw my top assassins after you,
and you came through with flying colors.
(beat)
Of course, the collateral damage
was a bit excessive, but worth it.
Assets are replaceable.
(smiles)
But you only have one family.

CHERRY
But why the thing with the White House?

HONEY
Well, let’s just say I have a
bit of an over-active imagination.
(stops, looks at them)
Imagine the possibilities.
With you two on board,
the world is our oyster.
Just think of it --
mother and daughters,
hell-bent on world-domination.

APRIL
On what planet do you think
we’d work for YOU?

HONEY
A planet where a nuclear device
is sitting in the Senate chamber
during a joint session of Congress?
(laughs)
Just kidding. There goes that
over-active imagination again --
(beat)
But seriously? What choice do you have?
Every law enforcement agency
in the world wants you --
(beat)
AND I have your CHILDREN.
(beat)
Don’t you see? You have no choice.

Cherry and April’s heads SPIN.
They look at each other.

CHERRY
I want proof they’re ALIVE.

Honey shakes her head.
Wipes a tear from her eye.

HONEY
You don’t trust me.
Your own MOTHER.
(beat)
Then I’ll give you some time
to THINK ABOUT IT.

She PRESSES a button
on the floor with her boot.

A trap door below them OPENS --
and Cherry and April FALL into the hole.

INT. MANN’S CHINESE THEATER - SUB-BASEMENT - NIGHT
A dimly lit bunker. Shelves of supplies on one wall.
Water DRIPS from the ceiling onto the cement floor.

We hear the faint sound of
something scurrying about in the shadows.

Cherry and April HIT the floor
with a SLAP, THUD. They groan. Sit up.
Massage their bruised muscles. Look around.

CHERRY
What is this place?

APRIL
(peers in the dim light)
Looks like some kind of --
storage room or something.

CHERRY
Looks more like -- a bunker.

APRIL
Maybe it’s a bomb shelter.

Cherry feels something on her leg.
SHAKES it. Looks.

CHERRY
Ohmigod, a RAT.

APRIL
WHAT? WHERE?

She pulls out her lighter,
FLICKS it on, to reveal --

The room is FILLED WITH RATS.
Surrounding them.

They SQUEAL at the light.
Then JUMP on Cherry and April.

The girls try to BAT them away
as they get BITTEN all over their bodies.

They SCREAM. Try to WHACK them away.

CHERRY
SHIT, NOOOOOO GET OFF.

APRIL
GET OFF ME. GET OFF ME.

CHERRY
THE SHELVES, OVER THERE.

They RUN to a wall filled with shelves,
start climbing them.

The rats cling to their legs,
nipping and tugging. SQUEALING.

April gets half-way up, BANGS her leg,
knocking them off.

Cherry does the same.

They climb to the top.
Look down, see --

A HOARD OF RATS,
undulating like a wave,
moving toward them.

CHERRY (CONT’D)
What are we GONNA DO?

APRIL
I’m thinking, I’m THINKING -- .

2 comments:

  1. Love that line.... "so many men... so few bullets in a gun..." :)

    Grim and Gruff.... cute! Haha!

    So is that real technology? That is frickin' amazing!!

    OMG!!! Their MOTHER?!?!? Oh My God!!! What an evil woman... to do that to her own flesh and blood... but, now... a dilemma.... will the girls kill their own mother to save Cherry's children?

    This is awesome, Carole.... wow, talk about not seeing a plot twist coming... whew... damn!

    Oh no! Not RATS!!! Awwwwwwww.......(runs screaming out of the room....)

    Sorry... I'm back.... Okay, April, honey... think harder.... I'm about to wet myself!

    Great chapter, hun! This is such an AWESOME story!!!

    XOXOXO <3 <3 <3

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  2. Yep, that's real shit, doll. ALWAYS research my techno-stuff.

    See, the thing is, in part one, which you haven't read, their whole adventure was set up by their FATHER, which they find out shortly after they discover they are long-lost SISTERS, so bringing mom into the picture completes the evil family dynamic ...

    BWHAHAHAHA!

    Get ready. More fun in store ...

    xoxo

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