Friday, February 24, 2012

Paulie Walnuts And The Sundance Shit



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In Chapter 30 of BABY HEISTER, the cops trace the bullet-ridden hearse back to Jo, and now know she killed the cop that pulled her over. Meanwhile, Flint Cole fucks with the heisters he's trying to question ... and back at the safe house, Kelsey and Simon get 'up close and personal' ...


INT. POLICE VAN - MOVING - DAY
Flint sits in the passenger seat talking on his cell.
Squints at the GIANT COP who’s driving (40’s).

FLINT
Rooker. What’s up?

INTERCUT WITH:

INT. DARRYL ROOKER’S OFFICE - DAY
Rooker sips a mug of coffee. Big smile.

DARRYL
Just got a lead. A big one.
Hitchhiker witnessed a patrolman
get shot in East LA after he
pulled over a hearse with expired tags.

FLINT
What does that have to with
the price of gash in Chinatown?

DARRYL
Sheriff’s office found it
abandoned at a gas station,
dusted it for prints --
and guess who was driving?

FLINT
I dunno. Vincent Price?

DARRYL
Jo Hazard.

FLINT
Fuck me.

DARRYL
It gets better.
She was heading toward downtown LA.

FLINT
Easy place to disappear.
All those old warehouses --

DARRYL
No shit.
We’re setting up a command base
at an abandoned grocery store,
corner of Hill and Third.

FLINT
I’ll head over there after I
finish interrogating
Paulie Walnuts and The Sundance Shit.

DARRYL
Any luck yet?

FLINT
Still waiting.

DARRYL
For what?

FLINT
Them to be well-done.

INT. POLICE VAN - REAR COMPARTMENT - DAY
Reno and Dusty sit on the bench.
Red-faced. Sweating. In agony.

Flint’s smiling appears in the window.
They look.

See him holding a bottle of water.
Take a long chug. Laugh.

INT. DOC’S LOFT - DAY
Doc, Jo and Kelsey sit on couches and chairs
in the living room area.

Simon stands in front of them.
Looks a bit dishevelled.
But still bright and cheerful.

SIMON
It was bad luck.
Pure and simple.

DOC
A cop’s daughter.

SIMON
Yeah. I mean, how was I to know?
Bloody Nissan Sentra piece of shit.
THAT kinda car NEVER has LoJack.

KELSEY
How soon they pick you up?

SIMON
Ten fucking minutes.

DOC
When’s your court date?

SIMON
Next month.

DOC
So why did you want to see me?

SIMON
Well, I know I didn’t earn my share,
but when I heard
Reno and Dusty got busted,
I didn’t dare go back
to the motel to get my stuff.
I just need a place to crash
until I figure out my next move.

DOC
You can stay here for awhile.
(looks at Kelsey)
I’m sure Kelsey won’t mind.

PUSH IN ON Kelsey’s face.
Her secret smile.

KELSEY
Hey. The more the merrier.

EXT. WAREHOUSE - ROOF - NIGHT
Kelsey sits on the ledge.
Looking out over the city.

Sipping a bottle of beer.
Smoking. Deep in thought.

CAMERA finds Simon.
Sitting a few feet away.

Takes a chug from a bottle of vodka.
Watching her.

KELSEY
Doc says it’s too dangerous.

SIMON
I could help you.

KELSEY
Really?

SIMON
Yeah. Bastard deserves to die.

Kelsey smiles.
He moves a bit closer.

SIMON
You should do that more often.

KELSEY
What.

SIMON
Smile. You always look so -- serious.

KELSEY
Haven’t had a reason.
(whispers)
Until now.

They stare at each other.
Lean in. Softly kiss.

SIMON
I’ve thought about that
for a long time.

DOC (O.C.)
There you are.

REVEAL Doc.
Standing near the entrance to the stairs.

Kelsey and Simon pull apart,
the spell broken.

KELSEY
Hey. What’s up?

DOC
Just got a page from Atlas.

KELSEY
Atlas?

DOC
From Griff and Chelle’s crew.

KELSEY
Oh -- wow.

DOC
C’mon downstairs.
He’s on his way over.

KELSEY
What does he want?

DOC
Remember that idea you had
about knocking off that bank again?

2 comments:

  1. Uh-oh... isn't there a rule about messing with the boss's daughter? Well, grand daughter in this case. Careful, Simon! Lol!!

    Good to see Simon back. So, he stole a cop's daughter's car? Oh man... talk about bad luck! Poor guy....

    Cool... so they really are going back to that bank? I'm with Kelsey... no one is gonna expect it. They should be able to pull it off.

    Dusty and Remo ought to be getting plenty nervous... they're not going to make it out, are they? I mean, it'd be suicide for the rest of the gang to try and break them out, right?

    Looking forward to next week! :D

    xoxoxoxo <3 <3 <3

    Roni

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  2. Hey, Kelsey's gotta have a love interest, right?

    Going back to the bank and rob it again is the only way Kelsey can have closure about what happened to her parents.

    That, and also taking care of certain Japanese gang leader (now out on bail) ...

    !

    xoxoxo

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