Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Dirty Little Girl



Hey there, crime kids. Happy fucking HUMP DAY. It's time once again to take a trip to the dark side, where your most violent fantasies become sins of the flesh, right here, where the hardboiled action is non-stop, at the coolest crime joint in cyberspace ... at That Killing Feeling.

In Chapter 15 of DAZED, BEAUTIFUL & BRUISED, suspended homicide dick Carrie Love takes matters into her own hands, and does some surveillance on murder suspect Dina Daerr, and makes a shocking discovery about her new flame Laura Lang ...


EXT. OCEAN AVENUE - NIGHT
The haunting, sexy, Euro-cool sounds of Hooverphonic over --

Dina’s 100k convertible cruises
past the Santa Monica pier.

The sleek German vehicle slows,
makes a turn into --

EXT. DINA’S BEACH HOUSE - CONTINUOUS
A big, Cape Cod-style place
on a primo lot on the beach.

The Benz pulls in. Parks.
Dina gets out. Goes inside.

ON THE STREET
Ilona’s black ghost pulls up to the curb.

INT. DINA’S BEACH HOUSE - LIVING ROOM - CONTINUOUS
The rumpled beauty throws off her purse,
pick up a remote, punches on MUSIC --
some 60’s swinging cocktail croon.

Happily swerves down a hallway.

IN THE KITCHEN
She POPS the cork off a bottle of wine.

IN THE VAN
They listen on headsets.

ILONA
Someone’s getting a buzz.

CARRIE
The question is -- is she alone?

IN THE KITCHEN
She dials a number on her cell.
Sips her merlot.

DINA
Klaus?

SPLIT SCREEN WITH:

INT. KLAUS SPEER’S STUDIO - EDIT BAY - AT THE SAME TIME
Klaus barks into his headset, eyes flashing.

KLAUS
You’re late.
Do you have any idea
how bad you’ve been?

DINA
(bows head)
I’m sorry -- sir.

KLAUS
(SLAPS the counter)
Did you bring home the dailies?

DINA
I’m afraid I -- I --
(beat)
Left them at the studio.
I, uh -- forgot.
We had an -- an emergency.

KLAUS
You forgot?
You left them at the studio?
(ominous)
What kind of emergency?

Pause.

DINA
I -- shot someone.
Killed them.
It was a mistake --
they weren’t supposed to be
real bullets.

KLAUS
You nasty -- filthy --
dirty little girl.
How could you do that.
After all I’ve done for you.
I can’t begin to
express my disappointment.
My complete dismay.
(beat)
Such a bad, bad girl.
Do you know what we do
to dirty little bad girls?

INSIDE THE VAN
Silence. Dina breathes heavily.

DINA (O.S.)
You -- you --
CARRIE
(aroused)
What?

Ilona stares at her.

CARRIE
What. Don’t look at me like that.
(beat)
You’re taping this, right?

IN KLAUS’ STUDIO
He smiles into the wireless
clipped to his leather jacket.

KLAUS
We start principal photography.

ACROSS THE ROOM
Laura sits in a director’s chair.
Sips from a glass of wine.

LAURA
And let the bodies
fall where they may --

2 comments:

  1. Hmm... sounds like Dina likes to submit... what'd I do with my paddle? ON YOUR KNEES, BITCH!! Muaahh!!

    Okay... did I miss something... who is Klaus? Competition? And, what's up with Laura and Klaus? OMG!! Laura is the one who switched bullets because Klaus wanted to get Bruce to shoot a real snuff film...hmmm This is getting interesting, yes, things are definitely getting interesting.

    Okay... I gotta go check out your new group... hehe.

    xoxoxoxo <3 <3 <3

    Veronica

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  2. Just wait. Klaus is about to get into some kinky trouble with Laura. The plot THICKENS!

    (So glad you like the new group, doll!)

    Luv ya!

    xoxo

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