Wednesday, May 9, 2012

Father Knows Best


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In Chapter 38 of GUN-WILD, as Cam and Rod continue their daring daylight bank robbery in West Hollywood, Cam's father, billionaire medial mogul Geffin Clinch shows up to try and convince her to give herself up ...


EXT. FIRST INTERSTATE BANK - DAY
Burly Police Chief
chats with the SWAT COMMANDER.

Geffin Clinch and an
ACNE-SCARRED UNIFORMED OFFICER
approach them.

ACNE-SCARRED UNIFORMED OFFICER
Chief.
This is the girl’s father.

BURLY POLICE CHIEF
Mr. Clinch.
Thank you for coming.

GEFFIN
Please, call me Geffin.
Tell me what I need to do.

BURLY POLICE CHIEF
We’d like you
to speak with her.
See if you can talk her
into giving herself up.

GEFFIN
I’ll see what I can do.
I do a lot of negotiating
in my business --
but, this --
(trying for tears)
This is my daughter.

EXT. MILLIONS OF MILKSHAKES - ROOF - AT THAT MOMENT
Gato takes position lying down.
Adjusts his sniper-scope rifle.
Aims it at the bank entrance.

GATO
(sees Geffin)
What the fuck?
What’s HE doing here?

IN THE BANK
Cam guides the women
back into the vault.
Closes the door.

Walks over to Rod,
who is pacing furiously.

ROD
(stops)
How you feeling?

CAM
It’s WHITE HOT.
I wanna fucking
KILL SOMEONE.

ROD
(pulls out a joint,
lights it, gives it to her)
Here. This might help.

CAM
Thanks -- Sundance.

ROD
Any time, Butch.

She takes a big hit.
Holds it in. EXHALES.

ROD
Don’t worry, baby.
I’ll get us out of here.
As soon as the bus gets here --

GEFFIN (O.C.)
(LOUD, on a megaphone)
Cameron, this is YOUR FATHER.
Please come outside.
I’d like to TALK TO YOU.

CAM
What the FUCK?

ROD
Your -- FATHER?

CAM
What’s HE doing here?

GEFFIN (O.C.)
Please, Cameron. Let’s talk.
I know we’ve had our -- problems --

CAM
Problems? Problems? PROBLEMS?!
(KA-CHINKS her gun)
I’ll show you a PROBLEM --

2 comments:

  1. Oh shit!

    Geffen... you might want to take cover!

    Oh... the fur is gonna fly now... damn!

    Let the carnage begin! Bwaahaaa!!

    xoxoxoxo <3 <3 <3

    Roni

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