Wednesday, September 3, 2014

Family Values


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In Chapter 3 of BLUE HOTEL, we return to the seedy Venice Beach hotel, where boozy blocked writer Holly Land eavesdrops on her neighbor, hooker Alona Tal, as she finishes servicing her client, school teacher Gill Sherry ... and this then taken aback when Alona invites her out for a drink ... and maybe more ...


INT. HOLLY’S SHITTY HOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
Holly sits at her desk,
typing on her laptop.

She stops.
Takes a sip of vodka.

Stares at the screen.
Hears something.

She gets up.
Takes the picture off the wall.

Presses her ear against the vent.
Listening.

ALONA (O.C.)
God, YES.
That’s so FUCKING GOOD --

Holly grabs her drink.
Drains it. Listens.
Heart pounding.

EXT. LONG BEACH - HARBOR - NIGHT - AT THAT MOMENT
An old, battered red BMW convertible
pulls up to a decrepit warehouse. Parks.

Beggar gets out.
Walks over to a doorway.

KNOCK-KNOCK-KNOCKS on it.
A small window OPENS.

A nasty-looking EUROTRASH THUG (30’S)
looks at him through the glass.

Grins a decayed smile.
The door OPENS.

EUROTRASH THUG
Mr. Leck.
So nice of you to drop by.

BEGGAR
Vlad.
Looking dapper as usual.

INT. WAREHOUSE - CONTINUOUS
Beggar and Vlad walk over to a
makeshift table made out of a
piece of plywood on two saw horses.

A suitcase is on it. Open.
Inside, a dozen plastic bags
filled with white powder.

A GREASY THUG (20’S) grins at Beggar.

GREASY THUG
Look.
Is 'Power-Seller.'

BEGGAR
Nice to see you too, Sasha.

Sasha takes out a packet.
TOSSES it to Beggar.

SASHA
I assume you want usual deal?

BEGGAR
You know my credit is good.
I’ll be able to move this
in a week, tops.

VLAD
You do more thinking about
coming to work for us full-time?

BEGGAR
I’ll have to get
back to you on that.
Kinda like being my own boss.

VLAD
That may be.
But as part of organization,
you have protection.
And are part of family.

BEGGAR
Not sure I’m into --
family values.

INT. HOLLY’S SHITTY HOTEL ROOM - AT THAT MOMENT
Holly sits at her desk.
Staring at her laptop.

She pours the last of the
vodka bottle into her cup.
Makes a face.

HOLLY
Shit.

A soft TAP-TAP-TAP at the door.

HOLLY
Alona?

Alona glides into the room.
Dazzling smile.

ALONA
How did you guess?

HOLLY
Uh -- lucky?

ALONA
You look so sad.

HOLLY
Writing’s not -- going well.
I’m blocked.

ALONA
(sees the empty bottle)
Well, now wonder.
You gotta dead soldier.
Come on down to the bar
with me and take a break.
Keep me company.
(pulls out cash)
It’s on me.
Gotta straight flush.

HOLLY
I dunno --

ALONA
C’mon, I won’t bite.
I promise.
(beat)
Unless you want me to.

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