tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-744260777294683965.post1678256841349717738..comments2023-11-14T19:38:15.665-08:00Comments on That Killing Feeling: Take Me To The Dark Sidecaroleparkerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13884570418275436327noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-744260777294683965.post-42989471566687088682011-08-15T22:00:48.645-07:002011-08-15T22:00:48.645-07:00<3<3Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13430872985988041256noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-744260777294683965.post-55898872977272283352011-08-15T10:34:15.728-07:002011-08-15T10:34:15.728-07:00Not to bad, huh? I added the bit with the ejector...Not to bad, huh? I added the bit with the ejector seat later on. <br /><br />The BIG problem, however, is -- 'what happened to Bernie?' He just DISAPPEARS.<br /><br />Ah, well. I've improved a lot as a writer since then, as you'll see in WILSHIRE BOULEVARD, coming up next ... <br /><br />xoxoxocaroleparkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13884570418275436327noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-744260777294683965.post-1927822910926947212011-08-14T22:04:44.218-07:002011-08-14T22:04:44.218-07:00OMG!! OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD!!
This was FUCKING AW...OMG!! OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD!!<br /><br />This was FUCKING AWESOME!!<br /><br />Wow! And, this is some of your earlier work?<br /><br />OMG!! God, it would be quicker to tell you what I didn't like about the chapter, than what I did.<br /><br />.<br /><br />See... that was quick, wasn't it? LOL!! <br /><br />Right from the very beginning - "COMMANDOS fly down on cables like lethal puppets in black." I knew this was going to be amazing!<br /><br />"...lethal puppets in black." AWESOME!<br /><br />Can you believe I completely forgot Carrie still had that little chemical weapon in her mouth? Oh no, wait... I didn't forget... I thought she had thrown it up. So, that was a nice little surprise when she spat it into Bagger's mouth! And, I love her lethal footwear... I GOTTA get me a pair of those! Hahaha!!!<br /><br />Whoa... wait a minute here, missy... no happy ending?<br /><br />"She takes a long pull of her savior. <br />Pushes back burning tears."<br /><br />I mean. that's a nice line and everything, but really... no happy ending? :(<br /><br />YAY!!! Felina! I knew it!! (Okay, maybe, not really... but hoping...) :)<br /><br />What... no rockets on the Aston? LOL!! <br /><br />Love the dialogue... the voice overs are amazing, as always... great imagery with the Aston and the girls... all those knives and bullets flying...<br /><br />Best exit line I've seen in a while...<br /><br />"Getting laid saved my ass!"<br /><br />Incredible story, hun!! Can't wait to see what you got next! :)<br /><br />Love you! MWAH!!<br /><br />xoxoxoxoxo<br /><br />RonnieAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13430872985988041256noreply@blogger.com